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View Full Version : Hiromi - character sketch Hiromi 07-22-2005, 09:57 PM Sooooo. I got bored at work (surprise! :P ) This is a picture of how I envisioned Hiromi. Just a scribble, was too lazy to paint her or..erase.. but :D i like it. And Trin - don't yell at me! Kazuo's coming ^_~ http://www.snow-lotus.net/hiromi.jpg Sykoi 07-22-2005, 10:01 PM Very nice! Did you purposely make the background look old / messy? Cause it adds to the scene :P Kiros 07-22-2005, 10:04 PM Thats awsome Hiromi~ And i agree the backround looks cool, but i dont think you did it on perpose ToshiMaru 07-22-2005, 10:06 PM omg, that is so awesome! Hiromi is the best! :D Slots 07-22-2005, 10:26 PM ugh ive been around my friends too long ... here i am sitting here critiquing how you drew it XD anyways thats a really really nice drawing the paper used makes it seem more ... there... only wish i could draw as good as you so i could show how i envisioned my guy ... heh... moses 07-22-2005, 10:39 PM that is a freakin kick *** drawing! cant wait for kazuo! Kuraku Hideaki 07-23-2005, 01:24 AM Now thats some good work. I wish i could draw like that. Trin 07-23-2005, 01:46 AM that is a freakin kick *** drawing! cant wait for kazuo! Oh god, now I'm pressured to finish Hiromi's story. I know what I'll be doing for the next 24 hours. Hiromi, awesome drawing. Can't wait to see what I look like. :D ShininShado 07-23-2005, 02:21 AM Aye, totally agree, excellent artwork there Hiromi. Grun 07-23-2005, 05:11 AM Hey, that's very nice! Do you use a special type of paper? Not to say I can draw myself, but I hope you don't mind if I point something out. The eyes, I would suggest you add pupils. They look, to me at least, a bit zombie-ish. And also that you add a bit more to the middle of the mouth, I can't quite see the expression. Very nice, perseption on the feet and all. Hiromi 07-23-2005, 08:17 AM Heh thanks guys ^_^ Yeah most of my sketches do look a bit zombie-ish. I keep them simple because I plan on painting them - too many lines is a pain in the ass :D Most of the detail comes out in the color. And that's not actually the paper I used, I just tweaked the colors so it's easier to see. Standard compy paper swiped from my boss' printer is what I doodle on XD But the original doesn't have much contrast so it's pretty muddled. Haha yeah and the background..er..of COURSE it was on purpose! >.> Actually it was just a mixture of "ehh..I'll erase that later *handsmear* *scribble* *drool*" It's all nice and wrinkly because my cat sat on it. :p AND TRIN!! If I don't get my story... I'm putting Kazuo in a dress. Maybe a little geisha-kazuo action would be in order. :P hehe just kidding. Take your time hun, no rush on the story because, honestly, if you had told me to rush the Kazuo pic...I'd have told you to shove it. ^_~ ugh ive been around my friends too long ... here i am sitting here critiquing how you drew it XD Go ahead, I'd love a little criticism. Helps keep my suckage in check ;) Trin 07-23-2005, 01:44 PM AND TRIN!! If I don't get my story... I'm putting Kazuo in a dress. Maybe a little geisha-kazuo action would be in order. :P hehe just kidding. Take your time hun, no rush on the story because, honestly, if you had told me to rush the Kazuo pic...I'd have told you to shove it. ^_~ I really should've finished reading that part...because I was up until 4AM writing your introduction. @_@ Chronor 07-23-2005, 03:02 PM Man wish i could post my artwork, It's probably on par with yours but i like your style. But saddly...no scanner..so no go. Kiros 07-23-2005, 03:04 PM Well you could use a camera, or for 2 bucks scan it onto a disc at walgreens i think, or one of those dang phamacys Chronor 07-23-2005, 05:22 PM eeh...true...but i'd rather use my digital and pay $0. :D No matter what you offer...you just can't beat FREE! ShininShado 07-23-2005, 08:12 PM Please stay on topic. Hiromi's got some good talent maybe could be used for to promote game. :scratchch KazeKuroi 07-23-2005, 08:28 PM I like the background accidental effect, It gives it almost an Ink painting style. You should consider using a non photographic blue pencil for you sketching. You need to either shorten the arms or elongate the legs, because from the perspective you used they look about the same length. The breasts seem a bit unnatural as well, I can't figure out if these lines are for shading or unnatural folds in the shirt. The overal presentation of it is wonderful though. I hope I didn't offend ya. Edit~ OH if you are going for the anime look, Females have a smaller mouth then males. Her's is rather large in comparision to her face/expression, saying she is very masculine. Edit again~ A tip for drawing Iris's Don't look at your pen, look in between their eyes while drawing them. This will actually make them look like they are focusing! Trin 07-23-2005, 08:33 PM Edit~ OH if you are going for the anime look, Females have a smaller mouth then males. Her's is rather large in comparision to her face/expression, saying she is very masculine. Hiromi's character is supposed to be pretty tomboyish. That said, though, most of Hiromi's art is not very animeish. She does a great job of developing her own style. KazeKuroi 07-23-2005, 08:38 PM Well, her sig and that is very Anime-ish. The sad thing about anime, Is it's not even Japanese, It's American, The Japanese took the stylings of betty boop. I swear japanese take everything and make it better. Slots 07-23-2005, 08:55 PM actually when you look at it ... her art style has no resembalance to anime ... one they eyes are all wrong for anime ... two the head doesnt have the shape most animes use... or something like that... it doesnt have that feel to me... and also .. if japan made anime as a rip off of american cartoons then... what to you call the american cartoons that are a rip off of anime? Kiros 07-23-2005, 09:01 PM not really, they are different because they are from different cultures, so neither is ripping the other off, and as for anime.. hiromis pic isnt quite anime, but its great as far as character models go, she should consider animation seriously Hiromi 07-23-2005, 09:29 PM A Kazuo sketch, not THE Kazuo sketch - but I like this one a lot - crapped it out in record time before we locked up for the day :D Figured I'd do the Kazuo counterpart to the first sketch in celebration of the awesome story Trin wrote ^_^ http://snow-lotus.net/kazuo.jpg Kaze, thank you for the criticism, I'll keep your pointers in mind. Thanks for the pupils tip, I usually leave all eye color out when sketching, that's all added in later, digitally. But thanks again ^_~ Trin 07-23-2005, 09:31 PM Holy crap, I look awesome! ShininShado 07-23-2005, 09:31 PM Wow, that's really good Hiromi, you should be proud of your talent! Kiros 07-23-2005, 09:38 PM dang, hiromi your so good. Trin 07-23-2005, 09:39 PM Now if people would only read and comment on the Hiromi story I toiled over until 4am this morning. *cry* Hiromi, pimp my writing! Hiromi 07-23-2005, 10:02 PM Read Trin's writing!! *shows leg* It's such a good story!! *bends over* (how am I doing? XD) Seriously though, it's amazing. Sucked me in after the first paragraph. Trins the best!! :D Chronor 07-23-2005, 10:31 PM Woah...i can't even compete...Great Job! How long have you been drawing? Hiromi 07-23-2005, 10:35 PM Umm..since about my junior year of high school so ...3 or 4 years seriously. But I was always a fingerpainting kinda kid. ToshiMaru 07-23-2005, 10:39 PM lol, Kazuo kind of looks like Mugen from Samurai Champloo. :D Slots 07-23-2005, 10:42 PM oh oh oh hiromi should draw more AWESOME pictures like of other chacters o.0 >.> though thats just asking alot ... but still... i praise you and your drawings ... Trin's story was good too.... Trin 07-23-2005, 10:57 PM lol, Kazuo kind of looks like Mugen from Samurai Champloo. :D Funny you say that. I had originally modeled Kazuo after him, but never told Hiromi that. I guess she picked up on it. Interesting fact: The big difference between Kazuo and Mugen is that Mugen was Ryukyun, and Kazuo is Japanese. I guess they were also born in different eras, but who's counting? :) Kiros 07-24-2005, 07:17 AM He looks a little like mugen.. but a lot more not like him :P Yumi 07-29-2005, 06:16 PM *stalking Hiromi* Yumi 07-29-2005, 08:30 PM Hiromi whers my scetch *puts her hands on her hips with he fan in her hand* i alrady sent you the description via carrier pidgit Yumi 08-02-2005, 08:10 AM where has Hiromi dissapeared to ? Chronor 08-02-2005, 08:56 AM Ask Trin. Last i heard of her she was doing cover art for his book server complez v. 1 Hiromi 08-02-2005, 12:19 PM I'm not dead! I swear!! :eek: Had a busy weekend :P I've got a lot of other artwork to do - but once I get that pile finished with - the character sketches will be on their way! Yumi 08-02-2005, 04:23 PM no cookie for you tell you get the char scetches done!!!!! Trin 08-03-2005, 12:38 PM Ask Trin. Last i heard of her she was doing cover art for his book server complez v. 1 Bah, it's called Sever Complex. Get it right. >< Yumi 08-03-2005, 04:50 PM i know whats trins doing and what its called and that its good, but what about HIROMI!!!! ODA-NOBUNAGA 08-03-2005, 04:51 PM Awesome picture Hiromi, love the pose :) Trin 08-04-2005, 12:16 AM i know whats trins doing and what its called and that its good, but what about HIROMI!!!! Hiromi is doing the cover art for my book, as well as doing an art/writing project with me. She's really busy right now. She'll get to your sketch when she's free again. jmvdestroyer 08-04-2005, 12:41 AM those are awsome drawings Hiromi niiiiiice :D Yumi 08-06-2005, 01:42 AM Hiromi come back to us Yumi 08-11-2005, 05:50 PM hurry up girl its been like 2+ weeks now Akuma 08-12-2005, 09:52 AM Your drawing is fantastic, Hiromi. I wish I had someone like you to do one of my character. |