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Roshi
06-27-2005, 01:16 AM
l33tn3ss


Rhylus ducked as the halbred blade wickered past his head by inches. He had to go to his knees to avoid the strike, and his opponent, Mike-The Mighty, Mighty, wasted no time in taking full advantage of the loss of defense. Rhyl looked up just in time to see the ironclad butt of the halbred swing into his helmet slit and collide with his eyes. A mild, electric shock went down his spine, and a red haze covered his vision. The blow immediately robbed him of 6,000 energy points. Rhyl fell over. Sprawled on the ground there was no way he could gain his feet, even if he drank his last, precious bottle of Caledendurii Water. The duel was over, and he logged out just as Mike-The Mighty, Mighty vectored the halbred's swing downward and took Rhyl's head.

Tommy Hiko stood up in the center of his memory pad and cursed. He pulled the virtual helmet off of his head and shook the virt-gloves from his hands with savageness. He struggled with the clips that hooked him into the bungie unit until he was free, then he stalked over to the electromagnetic enviroment tracking board and slammed the off switch so hard that the emag field that arced over the memory pad buzzed in protest at the abrubtness of the cut-off. Tommy didn't care, he was tired of this old gaming rig, sick of it. One hundred Rhylus skulls now ornamented the gate to the Badlands, at least seventy-five of those defeats came due to the fact that he didn't have the newest thing going in virtual gaming. Seventy-five tournament deaths because he didn't have a Neural Cortex Clip. The surgical implant that clipped most of the voluntary nerve control of the human body and shunted it's signal to a working, virtual interface, would always be faster than his outdated, slow, hardware rig. He was losing because he was behind the times.

For a long time Rhylus was the best. For five years Tommy Hiko played Hardtime County, the biggest virtgame on the market, and for three years running his Player Tracker Sequences won trophies at the Vegas Virtual Awards. Last year the Trac of his battle with Yojimbo won for not only best dramatic action, but for best dramatic role-play too. Tommy Hiko knew how to edit and shoot a Player Trac, he even wrote and performed custom background music for them. Before the Cortex Clip hit the market, there were no Rhylus skulls anywhere, and Tommy was becoming a star. Tommy Hiko was the one word that gamers used exclusively for those who mastered the gaming nations and ruled the commercial countryside: l33tn3ss. Now Rhylus was struggling just to keep his guild status, and to make ends meet. Tracs where Tommy Hiko as Rhylus as winner were a thing of the past, and the Virt Awards were right around the corner. One year of gaming with the Cortex Clip and now Tracs with Tommy Hiko as Rhylus losing his head were all the rage.

Tommy made the decision he'd been fighting with himself about, a decision that was based on pure vanity. He would sell his Jette-Vette and buy a little Heloputt. And with the credits he would save on the switch in transportation, he would stop appearing in Tracking Sequences as Rhylus the Headless Hero. Tommy Hiko called his doctor.

***

"...alright, Tommy, I'm gonna go. But I'm gonna warn you again, just so we're clear.', Tommy's doctor stood at his bedside, 'Two weeks. You got at least two weeks before you go hooking up. I saw the new rig downstairs, and I know how it works. That Bumpsuit is no different than a pilot's Gsuit, except that it's programmed to apply G-forces, not inhibit them. Your blood don't need to be pumpin' and rushin' anywhere. Stay out of it."

"Doc, if I can get warmed up, I might be able to pull off one decent Trac before The Virts. If I can walk out with just one Virty Award this year, all this would be so worth it..." Tommy pleaded.

But the Doctor was having none of it. "Your eyes aren't ready either. Listen to me! That neural clip isn't a 'clip' at all. It's a colony of bio-magnetic nanospores that are programmed with specific tasks and growth. You screw up what those nanospores are doing and you screw with the interface, you screw with the interface, you could become a veg. You hear me, Tommy? Stay outta the games!"

"Yes sir." Tommy said. And left it at that.

***

One day. Actually the very next morning. Tommy stood in his bathroom, underneath the holo-mirror. He trained the view to the base of his skull and studied the laserburn stitches. Not a speck of blood marred the clear derma-plastic bandage. Screw it, he felt great. It was time to mount the ladder he must climb to achieve virtual existence supremecy once again. The two weeks restriction the Doctor gave him went right out the window, he would load up the game today...this morning...right now.

The Bumpsuit felt good, after he zipped in and activated the aircoils. He no longer needed the virtual contact gloves and boots, he didn't even need a helmet, the suit covered him head to fingers to toes. He no longer needed projection screen goggles, the game was now going to play directly onto the backs of his eyeballs, somehow. According to the owner's manual, all he needed was the teflon coated blindfold to block out light. Tommy stepped onto the electro-magnetic enviroment pad and hooked himself up to the bungie system that lifted and held his body just three inches off the floor. He used his wrist pad to turn on the e-mag field.

Instantly the aircoils in his suit tightened, reading the electro-magnetic fields. The field beneath his feet got solid, and the electromagnetic walls of the new player's menu went up. This primer stage was very familiar to Tommy, but without the clunkiness of his old game rig; without the boots, gloves and helmet, Tommy could feel the invisible walls of the tutorial with his fingertips and feet. The virtual world suddenly became a whole hell of a lot cooler for Tommy Hiko...

Tommy pulled the plastic blindfold down over his eyes, and he saw the title screen and load menu flicker and then brighten before him. The real world went dark, and he raised his hand toward the character load-up button called "Rhylus". He stopped. There were enough Player Tracs of Rhylus dying honorably, the last thing he wanted was a recorded gank of Rhylus by some supernewb, or even a low-level NPC, showing up at the Virts this year. Tommy was still unfamliar with his new gaming rig and when it came right down to it, his Doctor was right about his eyes, there was a shimmering fog that floated at the edges of his sight. If he entered Hardtime with Rhylus there was a chance he'd get attacked before he was used to his new situation. Tommy Hiko moved his hand across the mag wall of the tutorial and pushed the create character button. Little did he know, he would never see his beloved Rhylus again.

***

He stood on the familiar wooden walkways of Shiretown, but he wasn't used to being so small. It'd been a great while since Tommy Hiko had started out as a StreetUrchin. He knew he should head over to the NewbCenter, but first he had to feel combat in his new skin. Shiretown was one of the many protected areas that all beginners of Hardtime County started in and peaceful Players lived in. Combat was a pure PvE enviroment, with some parts of town totally patrolled and a 'pre-emptive law' in place that captured anyone after the first move in PvP contact. Combat was almost non-existent in Shiretown, but you could find it if you crossed the river and hung around the Port District. The law was lax there, and you could expect a bullying by NPCs and even worse the longer you hung about. The Port District was just the place for a Newbie to level up in semi-comfort. As long as there were no heavy-hitting Players hanging around, a newb could get the Streetfighter title in a couple hours of work.

He felt wonderful. The Cortex Clip had opened a brand-new door into Tommy's virtual reality, and he reveled in it. His hair waved in the electromagnetic breeze and his hands and feet felt like pads of pure air now that the heavy boots and gloves were gone. A wicked smile crossed the StreetUrchin's face as he made his way across the bridge.

There were only four people in the Badtoon Saloon when Tommy walked in; a Player named Gamblin' Dan, a NPC bartender, a NPC thug named Bootsie, and just the NPC Tommy had come to see. Stabber Butch sat at the table with Gamblin' Dan, losing at cards. At first Dan was Tommy's biggest worry, but Gamblin' took one look at the skinny StreetUrchin, wrinkled his nose, and activated his 'PvE' tag. Tommy nodded his thanks to Dan. Stabber was a whole lot more interested in the newcomer.

"Whatcha name, boy?" Butch leaned back in his chair, an elbow propped on the chair-arm, an empty shotglass in that hand.

Tommy wondered at the sound quality he heard now that clunky helmets and earpieces were gone. Butch's words now vibrated directly into the bones of his ear. "Adamus..." Tommy answered, and marveled at the sound of his own voice going straight into the game, no mic.

"Adamus? That's the name of a Pirate King, punk. You ain't no pirate, and you sure as hell ain't no king..." Butch spat. He stood up behind the table and smiled, his bad teeth as long and greasy as his hair and beard. He towered over Tommy, "You shouldn't be down here, boy. I'll give you till the count of five, then I'm gonna kick yer ass all the way back over the bridge..."

It had been a long, long time since Tommy faced Stabber Butch and any of the Badtoon Gang. But he knew all of their moves, and the Cortex Clip made him feel like a supernewb already. He knew he'd have to face Bootsie after Butch, but then he would have Butch's knife. He curled up his little fists and stared up at the Stabber. "C'mon, Butch. Let's get this over with."

Butch threw the shotglass directly at Tommy's face, and Hiko caught it with the sweep of a hand. The action was so quick and so abrupt that the whole room stopped for a beat. Tommy was especially suprised at the ease with which he caught the glass and the pump of the glass as it hit his palm. It had hurt a little. Sweet...

The wicked smile that crossed the bridge with him returned to his lips, and Tommy settled himself into a crouch. He intended on trying some of the higher martial arts moves he knew from Rhylus, even though it shouldn't be possible gamewise. But Tommy felt himself, gamewise, and he knew now why the Cortex Clip made such a difference. He knew he could beat the living electromagnetic pixels right out of Stabber Butch. And he proceeded to.

Butch drew his knife and started around the table. Tommy gently backed out the batwing doors behind him, into the sunlight and onto the boarded walk. The batwings flopped slowly still, and then Butch pushed both wide and entered the sunlight, blinking. He didn't blink more than twice when Tommy kicked him so hard in the groin that Butch went down kneeling. Tommy spun with a wicked backfist that landed his knuckles across Butch's temple. When the Stabber jerked his head back to face the StreetUrchin, Tommy rammed the shotglass between Butch's teeth and then rammed a knee up his chin. The glass and teeth shattered with a vicious crack. Tommy looked for a damage reading on Butch, he shouldn't be able to score such a knockdown so early no matter how good he felt gamewise. Tommy found he couldn't get a health read on Butch and that was also pretty much impossible, Stabber was an NPC. Tommy shrugged, must be a bug in his new system.

But everything else was cool. The impact of his foot into the Stabber's crotch was magical. He'd felt things in Butch crunch under his heel...pure magic. He bent down after he was sure Butch was out and picked up the Dirty Dagger that Stabber Butch carried. He walked back into the saloon.

Bootsie was already on his feet, and the Bartender had a sawed-off, double-barreled shotgun in his hands behind the bar. It was clear to them that whatever this 'Adamus' was, he damn sure wasn't no StreetUrchin. Gamblin' Dan sat quietly at the table, watchful.

"We don't want no trouble..." the Barkeep said. But Bootsie was a Badtoon. He knew trouble had just come to him. Bigtime. He pulled his knife and held the blade in a throwing position, elbow up, the bladetip in his fingers. He was pretty good with ranged attacks, and just as Adamus got set, the NPC hurled his blade.


(continued next post)

Roshi
06-27-2005, 01:16 AM
l33tn3ss (cont.)


Tommy also threw the Dirty Dagger. It wasn't supposed to be a good ranged weapon, but Tommy just naturally threw his blade in a hard, underhand/Rhylus throw that was meant for short distance work. It darted from his grip and hit the spinning knife of Bootsie. The daggers collided, and because Tommy's dagger had more mass and velocity, it barely moved from it's true trejectory. The heavy blade sliced Bootsie's left ear off. The light, throwing dagger that Bootsie had thrown now deflected towards the bar, whacking the barkeep's hands, making him drop the shotgun. Tommy took two running steps and leaped to the bar, landing in a sweep position and letting the bartender catch one of his heels with a jawbone. Tommy jumped behind the bar and recovered the shotgun just as Bootsie stood up, bleeding, mad as hell, and holding the Dirty Dagger.

Tommy sprang up and let Bootsie have it right in the face with both barrels as the thug let go of his second throw. The buckshot tore the Badtoon apart, and Bootsie's blade went wild and left, smashing the mirror behind Tommy's head. Tommy jumped back up on the bar as pounds of glass collapsed onto whiskey bottles and beer mugs and all of it rained down to the floor. He looked at Gamblin' Dan. Gamblin' Dan's PvE tag slowly disappeared.

"You know what happens if my PvP tag is red, right?" Dan asked the StreetUrchin from behind his round, dark glasses. The Cardshark stood up slowly as Tommy nodded. "Alrighty then..." Dan now grinned, evilly. The Player opened his coat and pulled out two, long and wicked dirks. Tommy could tell they were imbued by the way they glowed. "Arm yourself,' Dan nodded towards the bar. '...those daggers are behind it somewhere..."

Tommy jumped down onto the broken glass behind the bar, still not taking his eyes off the Gambler. "What if I find shotgun shells back here...?" Tommy asked. Gamblin' Dan slid one of his dirks into his broadcoat and pushed the tail of his coat back, enough to hook it behind the butt of a Peacemaker slung real low.

"Suit yerself..." Dan said, simply.

Tommy ducked back down, behind the bar and bingo; box of shotgun shells. He broke the Greener open and rammed two shells home in the chambers. With a flick of a wrist, he clacked the shotgun closed. "Gonna jump back up on the bar now." he shouted.

"Go ahead."

With the squeal of broken glass pealing from beneath the balls of his feet, Tommy jumped back up on the bar in one leap. He held the shotgun across his chest, both hammers rocking their cradles. Gamblin' Dan stuck the dagger into the table in front of him, and pulled the other tail of his coat out to expose a twin Colt hung on his other hip. The Cardshark's palms rested comfortably on the butts of the guns.

"You're a hack. Gotta be..." Gamblin' Dan stared with speculation.

"I ain't no hack. Just got a clip is all." Tommy stated, matter-of-factly.

"Yeah, whatever. I got my clip eight months ago, took me five tries to get out of here with the Dirty Dagger. Never did take on Bootsie, just made him chase me 'cross the bridge. And that shotgun. You shouldn't be able to fire it. You shouldn't even be able to pick it up. You're a hack..."

"I ain't no hack!" But Tommy lacked conviction in his words - the shotgun was way out of his bounds.

"You're a stinkin' hack, and I'm gonna report you. Well...first I'm gonna kill yah, then I'm gonna report yah...' Dan smiled, ' - Ready?"

Tommy dropped the shotgun to his side and nodded. Dan waved his left hand in the air and opened his tag menu. "If it's green, I'm mean, if it's red, you're dead.." Dan wiggled his eyebrows above his glasses and waved his fingers again. Gamblin' Dan's PvP tag came up glowing a dark scarlet and the two Players drew their guns.

Adamus whipped up the shotgun and pulled both triggers with a lazy ease that was blinding. To Gamblin' Dan, it was a blur. His Colts barely cleared leather, and he fired three shots into the floor with his left hand gun, while his right hand gun was shot out of his hand as the buckshot pounded into his body. Dan dropped like a butcher-hammered cow.

Tommy jumped down from the bar and crossed the room to where Dan lay in his own blood. "I ain't a hack..." he said.

The Gambler laughed and spat blood. "I ain't gonna report yah...who...who cares? My son will avenge m...me..." and he died.

"Yeah,' Tommy answered, 'See you around the NewbieCenter..." A small line of text ran across Tommy's eyes: 'Adamus, take care of my guns....'

Tommy would take care of Dan's guns, alright. He intended on taking the matched set of Peacemakers to Smoky, the gundealer in town, make a pretty penny off of them. When he reached down and palmed one of the Colts, though...

The gun was imbued. At sometime or another in the gun's life a necromancer had placed a powerful buff on the Colt, a buff that would increase the speed of the draw tenfold. Tommy sat back on his haunches and wondered at the Peacemaker. With the buff, there was no way possible that Tommy should have beat Gamblin' Dan to the draw. No way... It didn't make sense.

It was time to logout. None of this added up, and Tommy was now afraid that he really was in some way a hack. Besides, he was tired of the Newb level, he wanted Rhylus, he wanted Rhylus now. He stood up and tried to open his options menu. There was no option menu...?!

Suddenly he felt a thump at the back of his neck, a pain that drove him to his knees. The pain was sparkling in it's intensity, and Tommy's nose began gushing blood. His hands splayed out onto the floor, and sweat suddenly started running in streams down his face. He passed out as the world around him went opaque across his eyes...

***

"Tommy? Tommy, it's time to wake up. We gotta talk..."

Tommy Hiko opened his eyes slowly. A blur of shadow stood, hovering above him. He concentrated on focus and the image of Dr. Palov stood over his bedside, again. "Doc! I'm sorry, Doc, I shoulda listened to you..." Tommy managed to speak, weakly.

"Yes, you should have, Tom. You're screwed, son..."

"Wha...? I'm screwed? What do you mean?" Tommy didn't like the sound of that. He thought the Doc meant he might be paralyzed or something, so he wiggled his fingers and toes beneath his sheets and felt with relief as his digits all moved. The relief was short lived, though. As his mind cleared he looked harder at the Doctor that stood before him, and the room he recovered in. Instead of being dressed in the normal, dacron/polymer suit that Dr. Palov always wore, Tommy noticed with bewilderment that the doctor dressed in a broadcoat and string-tie, rather like the clothes Gamblin' Dan dressed in. And the room...

"This isn't my house...,' Tommy whispered with alarm, '...this isn't the hospital?" Tommy sat up in his bed.

"You never should have entered the Gaming Rig, Tommy. You never should have activated those nanospores so soon, something happened... When you tried to log off, the nanospores lost the interface, we think they may have made their own...." Doctor Palov stared down at Tommy sadly. "You can never leave Hardtime County, son. As far as we can tell, your consciousness and nervous system has been seamed totally to the game. You're trapped in it, Tommy..."

"What do you mean, 'trapped'? I can leave. Just gotta take off..." Tommy's fingers clawed at his eyes.

"It isn't there, anymore, Tom. None of it. You are in my hospital, in the terminal care ward. No game rig, no Bumpsuit, no blindfold. You don't need it. I am feeding you with IVs, and voiding you with bedpan Servos. You're a veg, Tommy. Your consciousness is hooked directly into the game and we don't understand it...and we can't unhook it..." Dr. Palov trailed off, and Tommy Hiko went very still as he realized slowly what had happened to him.

He was the game now. This was his existence. This was his home.

Tommy screamed as one word came to his thoughts. A word he had believed in, strived for, wanted with all his heart. One word that summed up all the despair and agony that crashed in upon him now...

l33tn3ss...

-end

by - MVL, 2005

Kuraku Hideaki
06-27-2005, 05:36 AM
W T F ?

Roshi
06-27-2005, 06:02 AM
sorry you didn't like it. thanks for being constructive, though.

Yukie
06-27-2005, 06:22 AM
Hi Roshi, its a really well written story so dont be discouraged :) i think kurakushin maybe just didn't expect it since this is a game about 16th century Japan. (and woot my first post lol)

ShininShado
06-27-2005, 09:29 AM
That's interesting.

Roshi
06-27-2005, 04:08 PM
Thank you for your understanding and kind words. I am not well versed in 16th century Japanese history, so I dared not write about it. I hope Kura-san will understand, I wrote about gaming, one thing I have some experience in. When Tatsumaki goes live, perhaps I will feel comfortable enough to try a LoW based story.

I love telling stories...would anyone care if I tell another?

-Roshi

Sicarius
06-27-2005, 04:25 PM
Feel free to tell stories, maybe ill even post some of my own...

Chronor
06-27-2005, 05:24 PM
Like...Woah!
That was increadible. The combination of Life and Gaming reminds me of an old movie called "Existenze" or something like that. Basically, people are testing out a new game and it's graphics weave the reality of life into them through the brain. (same deal) though it's wierd hearing how supid gamers (and people in general) are about doing something they shouldn't because they want it so baddly...deep....

Slots
06-27-2005, 05:34 PM
reminds me of .//Hack....

Sicarius
06-27-2005, 07:35 PM
I love .hack !!!

Kuraku Hideaki
06-28-2005, 03:43 AM
Oh, sorry if i offended you, its just that i never expected a sci-fi sort of rp thread here. Anyway, i really DO like it, its just that i was confused at first, and reacted inapropriately, and for that i am sorry.

Keep up the good work, hopefully you will learn more on 16th century Japan while on these forums ;)

ShininShado
06-28-2005, 10:04 PM
Yes, was pretty good, just a little different.

Roshi
06-29-2005, 05:40 AM
Thank you all for a most gracious welcome. I am studying Japanese history, and reliving my anime' days. Soon I should like to tell you all a story about those things. :)

I have promised another story, so I come bearing one. Shall I tell it to you? This story hinges upon the first one lightly, so if I am not clear on somethings, reading l33tn3ss might help with some of the smoke and mirriors. ;)

Thank you

-Roshi

Roshi
06-29-2005, 05:43 AM
The SubNet of Lost Electronic Souls


No one can ever point to a sure date as to the birth of the SubNet. All that anyone can say is that the phenomenon began early in the meteroic career of Michael Prometheus. Prometheus was a doctor with patients of the worst kind. Deep coma patients came to Dr. Prometheus to die. These were patients for whom cell-sampling and cell-stapling held no hope. Patients who's injuries or advanced illness or advanced age left them in a long and lingering wait for death to come. And while they waited for death to come, they played games...

What Michael Prometheus did for his patients was to take the existing virtual presentation technologies of Virtual Gaming and engineer it to the brains of his dying, comatose patients. And he received remarkable results.

TechNation was the biggest company that manufactured Virtual Games and due to a flaw in it's design of an implanted virtual interface, the Neural Cortex Clip, and a few massively hyped lawsuits, Dr. Prometheus was asked to head a panel to investigate the Cortex Clip by the World Gaming Commisson. The Cortex Clip was approved after months of research and changes. Also, after months of research, Dr. Prometheus believed that with the Cortex Clip he could give a paralyzed brain a signal that could bypass most of the brain's damaged functioning and actually 'wake' patients who were impossible to arouse by any other manner employed. He got a test case and gave his theory a shot. The sum of the equation was amazing, and the good doctor was in business. People who were brain-dead suddenly existed in a virtual world that made the brain react with thoughts and impulses and Michael Prometheus was hailed as a miracle worker.

Here is where a few point to as the birth of the SubNet.

At first the doctor wanted to keep his people shielded from the Virtual Gaming community, and so he struck a deal with TechNation to create a virtual character server system that would be indepentent from the gaming world. The company agreed, and gave each patient a 'free' account on the special system. Of course, relatives and friends who wanted to log on to visit their loved ones would have to pay the price of subscribing to a standard account on one of their commercial servers.

The Virtual Patients Group, (as Dr. Prometheus' people were known), were given a full plate of TechNation Virtual Games to play exclusively amongst themselves on their servers. But it wasn't long before they got tired of each other. They staged a revolt against the ban imposed by Dr. Prometheus by shooing their visitors away and refusing to help beta new titles that TechNation had asked them to bug-hunt. By now Dr. Prometheus was getting famous and rich, and the number of VPG patients was growing every day. The first VPG clinic was to be built. The gravytrain didn't need any bumps in the track at that time, and so the good Doctor caved in to the rebellion. The Virtual Patients Group was given access frames to nearly every subscription virtual game TechNation had on the market.

Some say it was at this point that the SubNet might have been created.

Soon after VPG players appeared in the gaming strata, one of Dr. Prometheus' patients died in real life, his 115 year old heart giving way. And his avatar remained alive and well in the virtual world. Unchanged, unphased, unbelieveable.

The press went nuts, and with every news report each station employed a 'virtual reporter' from every game on Earth interviewing The Avatar live: "How's it feel to know you have no body?" "What happens if you die in here?" "Does your virtual wife know?" It was a field day.

It was a secret affair when Dr. Prometheus had The Avatar's corpse exhumed and had the cerebral cortex of the body autopsied. That was pretty much game over for The Avatar, he winked out of existence.

Some speculate that here is where the SubNet happened, with the death of The Avatar.

Dr. Prometheus quietly ordered autopsies as standard procedure on all VPGs immediately after death, this time bowing to the will of the Company. The whole 'Ghost in the Machine' aspect of The Avatar episode was way too spooky for TechNation's paying customers. The Doctor did not mention this to any of his patients...

And when the next few VPGs died, their avatars lasted only a few hours after their bodies quit in real life. The VPGs all thought that The Avatar's extra weeks 'online' must have been a programming fluke. The news reported it that way, anyway...

***

The Badlands played out for miles before them. The darkness on the desert was more of a blue shade over everything, rather than a true dark of night. Gootch could see for quite aways. And he didn't like what he saw, "You're leading us into a hell hole, Biggs..." he said.

His partner, Biggs Harlow, nodded from his horse. "Yep, gonna see if that superposse has got a hair on their collective asses.', Harlow smiled wickedly, 'What, you worried, Gootch?"

"Damn right I'm worried. You're heading for the PwnU Indian Nations. If they get ahold of us, they'll kill us, Biggs. We don't got no water, and we didn't buy new horses at the pass. We can't keep pushin' em at this pace, without no water they're gonna die...' Gootch jerked his horse to a stop. 'Where are we going, Biggs?"

Harlow let his horse go a few steps further and talked over his shoulder. "Remember that poker-player we robbed outside of PrimeCity, that Gambler Vance guy?", he asked.

"Yeah, I remember."

Harlow pulled something from out of his duster and held it so Gootch could see. A blue, crystal teardrop about the size of a grapefruit hung on a chain from beneath his fist.

Gootch's eyes owled in suprise. "You gotta WaterCheat?!' Gootch trotted his horse to up beside Biggs, his eyes sparkling and trained on a thing he had never seen before. 'You aren't gonna use it, are you? Not really? We'll be fined..."

Harlow put the WaterCheat back in his pocket and chuckled. "The fine for using a WaterCheat is 2500. We just robbed the KittyTown bank for over 30,000 cash. It will take a week in real time for TechNation to bring cheater indictments against our characters, and get us into court. Plenty of time to get this cash exchanged, get this posse off our backs, and get to making some real money at the Faro tables..."

"How we gonna get these guys off? We got Doc WhiteHand, Mechinos, and that lawman, Sam Rock, on our butts. Those guys are the best! They catch everybody!" Gootch was a newbie at the badguy game, this was his first real swim in the bad side of the reputation meter.

"They don't catch everybody, they haven't caught me... Listen, first we gotta get this loot exchanged and get rid of the 'perp' tags KittyTown put on us. There is a Fence I know who lives with the PwnU tribes. If I can find the Fence and get him to wash this money for us, that posse back there will have to go tracking the bucks, not us. We can be in SinCity by the time the posse even realizes we're gone. After the cash is washed, KittyTown won't care about us anymore. They'll pay this posse a kill fee and hire detectives to track down the money...that'll be the Fence's problem, not ours." Harlow smiled.

"That don't get us to the PwnU in time, Biggs. The WaterCheat is great, but we have too much ground to cover." Gootch shook his head slowly. They were gonna die in the Badlands. Hanged, probably.

But Harlow Biggs got off his horse and pulled the WaterCheat from his coat. "This is a MultiCheat, my friend. I got three waterholes in this baby. The way I figure it, if that posse rides all night they'll get here by noon. By that time a waterhole that we put here will be dried up tighter than jerked meat. We're gonna water ourselves and the horses real good, and then ride like hell all night and day. If they keep up the pace, they will be out of water tomorrow. They will slow down. If we make sure there ain't nothing left of the waterholes we create, they won't make it to the Indian Nations. Sam Rock and his bunch are gonna die like dogs..."

Biggs strutted some paces away from where the horses stood and bent to the desert. Gootch sat on his horse and watched as a little pond grew around where Harlow knelt. Soon Biggs had to stand up, the water reached his thighs. "Ooo, dat feels so good..." The Outlaw splashed the water around himself. Gootch got down from his own horse and let it go. Both horses shuffled to the edge of the water and put their heads down...

The desert sky was lit with an explosion that killed both their horses dead. Gootch was looking right at the waterhole when it blew up. It was like a white light had started beneath Harlow's feet and had to bubble up to reach the surface. Then Gootch saw the light break the surface tension of the little pond and all hell shook loose. The light shot straight up into the sky and threw Biggs Harlow tumbling from the waterhole, as though the light had some kind of mass it used to eject him from it's water. Biggs hit the ground with a thump, but he didn't get a chance to get to his feet. He was struggling with something at his head, and to Gootch it looked for all the world like the strange, white light had fingers that were clawing at Biggs' hair. Biggs screamed and Gootch fumbled for his gun. As he brought the old navycolt up in a shaky, two-handed grip, he caught sight of Harlow's face. Gootch peed all over himself, both in the game, and in real life...

Harlow was on his hands and knees, he kept trying to get up but the light held him down. The fingers of light burned Biggs' hair, and seemed to sear through the flesh and into the bone of the skull. Gootch retched as a smell that couldn't possibly come from the game's scent-player reached his nose. Charred flesh, boiled blood, these things could not possibly exist in TechNation's programmed bank of aerosol recreations. But the sight and the smell wasn't what made Gootch lose his water, it was the words Biggs screamed as the light began slowly splitting his skull.

"I-I-I-I...can't, I can't...I can't la-la-log off! I...can't la-la-la-la-LOG OFF!! I CAN'T LOG OFF...!!"

(cont next post)

Roshi
06-29-2005, 05:44 AM
Gootch couldn't handle anymore. He pulled the trigger of his gun and the Colt went off with a roar. The light seemed to feel the bullet because a finger snapped out of the trunk and cracked and grew like a whip. In flash the whip flicked at the Colt in Gootch's hands. The big Navy Colt exploded, and the bang knocked Gootch flat. He slowly recovered enough to feel pain, and he began thrashing and struggling like Biggs, both of them laying in the desert night beneath a pillar of blinding light, screaming like children. When Gootch finally regained his knees he held his hands up before his face to try and guess the extent of the damage. What he saw went beyond his sanity. The Navycolt and his two hands were fused together in a disgusting knot of burnt meat, gunmetal and bone. Gootch let out a howl and passed out.

Soon Biggs went silent too, and the light reduced to a flicker, hovering above the water and clinging to Harlow's virtual corpse. Eventually the light above the water winked out altogether. The light on the corpse though, it began to follow and form around Biggs' body, starting from the gaping wound in his head and on down to his toes. The light covered and then seeped into the virtual cadaver of Biggs Harlow, and then glowed so bright that Biggs couldn't be seen any longer. The bright light shifted and wiggled, as if bones were being chopped and shifted, and as though muscle and organs were being shaved and sorted. Then the light receeded and Biggs Harlow was gone, his signal to the game service flickered and disappeared forever. Now a different man lay gasping at the edge of the waterhole, a man who could not be tracked...

***

Two hours after the coroner's reports came out, Michael Prometheus was personally escorted to his office in the middle of the night by big, black suited men from TechNation. At his desk the coroner's reports were slapped in front of him, and Dr. Prometheus was asked very nicely, 'Do we have a problem?'.

The files before him contained the official investigations and reports on the TechNation-game related deaths of two teenagers less than ten hours ago. Prometheus had watched the coverage of the local lad's passing on the news earlier that evening. He made the TechNation goons brew some fresh coffee and began to study the files.

The local boy's death was easily attributed to the conditions of his gaming equipment, although the heat involved in the initial conflaguration was a spike that fire investigators could not account for. The boy's virtual gloves had somehow shorted out the system and in an ensuing fire, the gloves became fused together by the burning plastics that made up the glove's frame. In the fire the boy must have panicked and somehow wrenched both his helmet, and the protective hood that kept his face insulated from charge, from off of his head. When the boy finally collapsed, his bare face hit the electromagnetic fields of the still activated game and he fried like a greasy egg. Worn out, ancient equipment, no doubt about it.

The other boy, though...

There was no accounting for the force and type of entry wound into the skull. Electricity just didn't shatter bone like that. But that wasn't the thing that chilled Prometheus down to the marrow of his bones. The entry wound wasn't a lightening bolt, the wound on the boy was a hole in his skull that was almost looked like it had been chewed open. The brain was gone and the entire spinal cord seemed to have been scooped out of the backbone, or sucked out, somehow. The gory pictures that showed the autopsy was enough to send shivers down the Doctor's own spine.

This boy's equipment was top of the line, this boy had a Cortex Clip implanted in his head. And this boy's death could not be explained. The Coroner couldn't explain it, and neither could Michael Prometheus. He turned to the TechNation goons that sweated over his shoulders and very nicely informed them that yes, they had a problem.

This is the point when all agree that the first 'renegade' artificial intelligence made it's presence known to the world of humans. Most experts believe that if the information that TechNation had held about this incident was made accessible to authories sooner, the SubNet of Lost Electronic Souls might never have come into existence. And 649 human deaths might have been prevented if the public had known about the virtual execution of The Avatar and all those who came after. Not that anyone at that time would have understood exactly what was going on. The deaths came in one long, rolling wave of murderous AI, and they stopped shortly after the cerebral cortex operations were ceased on all cadavers by Dr. Prometheus and his staff. TechNation then made it standard policy to delete those VPG avatars that died in real life and left a residual image in game. They had to hunt them like bloodhounds.

But the 636 souls of the SubNet could not be tracked, could not be found. After taking their hosts in a most gruesome manner, the accounts for the people they killed disappeared altogether, and the avatar that appeared ingame was no longer bound to TechNation programming. 636 'autopsies' on the Cortex Clips of his dead patients, 636 souls on the SubNet. It was an equation Dr. Prometheus hid from everyone, and a secret he took to his grave.

Seven high-level suits from TechNation were prosecuted and convicted of various charges stemming from all those deaths. Two mid-level suits committed suicide. And one certain Doctor got off scot free. He was hired by ImmerseU, the company that took over TechNation's holdings after that company went bankrupt when the lawsuits came flooding in. Dr. Prometheus' VPG clinics were sold to pay his own legal bills, so the job at ImU was just in the nick of time. He worked on the Cortex Clip, and became the virtual expert on 'SubNet Soul' sightings.

And the games went on...

-end

by - MVL, 2005

moses
06-29-2005, 08:08 AM
anouther great read! keep up the good work.

ShininShado
06-29-2005, 01:42 PM
Interesting.

Shirodaimyo Yukito
06-30-2005, 10:44 AM
Wonderful. Very wonderful. Though it may have nothing in relation to Tatsumaki, I enjoyed it very much. Tell us another one, Roshi. I would enjoy to hear more.

zt3
06-30-2005, 12:43 PM
Bump!

zt3
06-30-2005, 12:45 PM
Got any more stories? :headbang:

Roshi
06-30-2005, 05:44 PM
Thank you all. This site has the nicest people! I'm so glad you like stories.

But really, it has been mentioned that these stories have little or no ties to the subject. It is a role-play board after all. If the Site Master will bear with me, and forgive my intrusion, I have one more story to tell of this type.

And then, no more. The period piece/Tatsumaki story I have been working on will be ready.

So, if I may humbly ask for forebearence, I shall return soon with one last 'l33tn3ss' tale, and then be prepared to find something for yourself in high, Samuri style... :D

Thank you all, so much.

-Roshi

ShininShado
06-30-2005, 07:27 PM
Samurai story will be nice to read.

Shirodaimyo Yukito
07-01-2005, 12:51 PM
With how entertaining and captivating you first two were, for me, a samurai story would be a dream to read. I also cannont wait to read the third story of this trilogy.

Sicarius
07-01-2005, 04:31 PM
damn good reads.

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