yuir
11-10-2006, 12:38 PM
here a story for all you who are board, but I'm bad at storeys...so you know don't expect much from it:-P
my name is Yuir....,Hyuuga Yuir, but Hyuuga in not my real family name i was found at the age of around 3 along with fan with a strange symbol on it by, a member of the Hyuuga family.i was happily raised as one of there daughters,yet still i try every day to remember my past but the only thing is the emptiness,but at night i try to forget, because every night i have the same dream..no nightmare,.in the nightmare i here screams and feeling of a burning hot fire over my body......then in the darkness i see a form appear, its a dog but the dog has no body.. it's like it is made of the Shadows. with its 3 three red eyes and it White teeth it starts to run..i start to run...faster and faster i run,but it catchers up and jumps for me with its jaw seconds away...i feel the warm blood on my face.. then the silence and i awake...always the same.....always. so when on my twentieth birth day i said my good byes, and got the fan that had a link to my past, with it in hand i went out to find who i am..and that was two years ago
"...hmmm another town another dead end i can't believe its been two years and i have found nothing about this fan or who i am, maybe i should go back.. No i cant not yet...OK were to now"(yuir throws her fan in the air it glides down)" OK north it is.."(yuir leave the small no name town and starts to head north)"I'm almost out of money again, it look like, I'm going to have to find some work in the next town"
"I hate walking!!! were the**** is the next Town, this is the last time i listen to you, you stupid fan,..god its been four day already!.. well i might as well stop here it look like a good place to stop for the night,at least its a good thing its summer so i can sleep out side with out to much trouble..wait a moment i can hare the sound running water."( yuir rushes through some trees and brush)"..ah i know it, it's a river and a river means fish.....yay fresh fish for me, no bitter dried meat for me tonight"(yuir ties a bit of meat to a fin ribbon and throws it in the river)"yay yay fish for me,yay yay fish for me i love fish, fish for me"(two hour later) " please fishes, were are you? i got some nice meat for you " (four hours later)"were are you all!!!....Stupid fish ...(6 hours later)"mmm this dried meat is Sooo nice... I'm so lucky i didn't get any fish....., well i might as well turn in for the night....stupid fish."
"that dream again, but that's nothing new..all well time to pack up and go"(a few hours later yuir comes across a bridge over a river and starts to cross over it, then four men start to cross from the other side) " hay sugar were do you think your going this are bridge and there's a toll to cross it...lets see since your cute its...100mon to cross,but if you don't have the money i can think of another way or two for you to pay..ha ha"(he start to approach...yuir then reach behind her back the men jump back for a second thinking it was a weapon. then he start to laugh as he see its just a fan she pulled out.
He starches out his hand as to grab her by the shoulder.....yuir quirky fits his hand with the side of the fan)"arr..my hand you ****ing ***** you will pay for that"(he pulls a sword then he starts to lunge the sword forward)(yuir holds up the fan...and just as the sword passes through the centre of the fan yuir closes and twists it and the sword flys out of his hand then in a instant before he know what hit him a round house kick sends the guy flying of the bridge into the river below...
Now the three other men started to move forward slowly with there swords drawn...but yuir smiles,as she calmly closes her fan and put it away, then brings out what look like two opened metal fans with a Cain connecting the two together .Yuir starts to swing the metal fans through the air...the three man start to rush towards her..Yuir swing one of the fan's down across the middle man which slices down through his chest, while she swings the second fan over her head, straight into the man on the rights neck taking his head clean off.......After seeing this the third man stops in his track as he realises that he is covered with his comrades blood, he then lets go of his sword and drops to his knees and starts pleading for his life(Yuir simple look at him)"OK...money, how about money... here take it.., its all the money i got please just spare my life"(he leaves his wallets then starts to crawl back across the bridge till he gets to the other side then gets up and runs away)...Yuir picks up the money "look like i don't need to work now...well at least for a while"Yuir then pushes the bodies in to the river and carries on over the bridge
as she got to the end of the bridge, she had a strange felling that she had felt before and was compelled to look behind her..standing a few feet away was a women in a blue kimono and wearing a white mask with the same symbol that is on her fan.
"did you have to go so far?".."oh...its you again" "did you have to go so far?"hmmm.....they were just some stupid fool, they got what they deserved" "do you believe that?" "yes i believe that" "do you?" " yes i do" "i see"then a strong wind came up causing yuir too close her eyes just for a second. when she opened them again the women had gone. " that's right don't even say good bye"
yuir continues on her journey as if nothing had happened.That afternoon yuir final got too the next town "
to be continued
maybe if i feel like it, and if it get ok to good reveiws
ps i'll put this a head of time...selmo i dont care what you say:mad:
my name is Yuir....,Hyuuga Yuir, but Hyuuga in not my real family name i was found at the age of around 3 along with fan with a strange symbol on it by, a member of the Hyuuga family.i was happily raised as one of there daughters,yet still i try every day to remember my past but the only thing is the emptiness,but at night i try to forget, because every night i have the same dream..no nightmare,.in the nightmare i here screams and feeling of a burning hot fire over my body......then in the darkness i see a form appear, its a dog but the dog has no body.. it's like it is made of the Shadows. with its 3 three red eyes and it White teeth it starts to run..i start to run...faster and faster i run,but it catchers up and jumps for me with its jaw seconds away...i feel the warm blood on my face.. then the silence and i awake...always the same.....always. so when on my twentieth birth day i said my good byes, and got the fan that had a link to my past, with it in hand i went out to find who i am..and that was two years ago
"...hmmm another town another dead end i can't believe its been two years and i have found nothing about this fan or who i am, maybe i should go back.. No i cant not yet...OK were to now"(yuir throws her fan in the air it glides down)" OK north it is.."(yuir leave the small no name town and starts to head north)"I'm almost out of money again, it look like, I'm going to have to find some work in the next town"
"I hate walking!!! were the**** is the next Town, this is the last time i listen to you, you stupid fan,..god its been four day already!.. well i might as well stop here it look like a good place to stop for the night,at least its a good thing its summer so i can sleep out side with out to much trouble..wait a moment i can hare the sound running water."( yuir rushes through some trees and brush)"..ah i know it, it's a river and a river means fish.....yay fresh fish for me, no bitter dried meat for me tonight"(yuir ties a bit of meat to a fin ribbon and throws it in the river)"yay yay fish for me,yay yay fish for me i love fish, fish for me"(two hour later) " please fishes, were are you? i got some nice meat for you " (four hours later)"were are you all!!!....Stupid fish ...(6 hours later)"mmm this dried meat is Sooo nice... I'm so lucky i didn't get any fish....., well i might as well turn in for the night....stupid fish."
"that dream again, but that's nothing new..all well time to pack up and go"(a few hours later yuir comes across a bridge over a river and starts to cross over it, then four men start to cross from the other side) " hay sugar were do you think your going this are bridge and there's a toll to cross it...lets see since your cute its...100mon to cross,but if you don't have the money i can think of another way or two for you to pay..ha ha"(he start to approach...yuir then reach behind her back the men jump back for a second thinking it was a weapon. then he start to laugh as he see its just a fan she pulled out.
He starches out his hand as to grab her by the shoulder.....yuir quirky fits his hand with the side of the fan)"arr..my hand you ****ing ***** you will pay for that"(he pulls a sword then he starts to lunge the sword forward)(yuir holds up the fan...and just as the sword passes through the centre of the fan yuir closes and twists it and the sword flys out of his hand then in a instant before he know what hit him a round house kick sends the guy flying of the bridge into the river below...
Now the three other men started to move forward slowly with there swords drawn...but yuir smiles,as she calmly closes her fan and put it away, then brings out what look like two opened metal fans with a Cain connecting the two together .Yuir starts to swing the metal fans through the air...the three man start to rush towards her..Yuir swing one of the fan's down across the middle man which slices down through his chest, while she swings the second fan over her head, straight into the man on the rights neck taking his head clean off.......After seeing this the third man stops in his track as he realises that he is covered with his comrades blood, he then lets go of his sword and drops to his knees and starts pleading for his life(Yuir simple look at him)"OK...money, how about money... here take it.., its all the money i got please just spare my life"(he leaves his wallets then starts to crawl back across the bridge till he gets to the other side then gets up and runs away)...Yuir picks up the money "look like i don't need to work now...well at least for a while"Yuir then pushes the bodies in to the river and carries on over the bridge
as she got to the end of the bridge, she had a strange felling that she had felt before and was compelled to look behind her..standing a few feet away was a women in a blue kimono and wearing a white mask with the same symbol that is on her fan.
"did you have to go so far?".."oh...its you again" "did you have to go so far?"hmmm.....they were just some stupid fool, they got what they deserved" "do you believe that?" "yes i believe that" "do you?" " yes i do" "i see"then a strong wind came up causing yuir too close her eyes just for a second. when she opened them again the women had gone. " that's right don't even say good bye"
yuir continues on her journey as if nothing had happened.That afternoon yuir final got too the next town "
to be continued
maybe if i feel like it, and if it get ok to good reveiws
ps i'll put this a head of time...selmo i dont care what you say:mad: